The Olympic Sprints Finals Writing.

This writing was from 4 weeks ago, and my writing group kind of forgot about it during lockdown so today we are finishing it off. Our task was to write a moment in time about the olympic sprints, except we were the runners. I did it like I was an old Grandparent telling his grandchildren about the time, Like it says at the end "Can you tell me another story Grandad?" I thought that it added a bit of a finishing tough to the writing, and I think its really cool. I found it easy to use my descriptive language to make the reader interested in my story, because I read a lot of books and I learn lots of new words from these books. I found it hard to find a quiet place to record my video of me reading, because lots of people were outside recording too. Next time I think I should add more visiols into my publishing, like maybe more detailed people and different designs rather than copy past and change some colours up.