We were learning about commenting on our blog buddies blog post. We were asked to published a recrafted, finished writing for our blog buddies to comment on. I found it easy to polyline my little pictures. I did myself as a superhero for the start of the story, because I had a dream, and I also did the WhatsApp logo, from the story to. I found it hard to find my spelling mistakes and to edit in more rich words, so my writing will pop. I enjoyed re-creating the event of the earthquake. It was a bit scary at the time, but looking at it afterwards, I thought it would be a great story to write about. Next time I will edit in more adjectives so my writing is more interesting to read, and to get the reader hooked in.
My writing is about the March 3rd earthquake of 2021.
hey toby really cool side show i liked how you did long stems so you could paint a picture in the readers mind. how you polylined your characters is amazing.my personal favourite part was when you talked about when you were nice and safe back at home having a cup of tea.
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Thank you for the reply Keepa!
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