We were learning about how to write a persuasive script to persuade someone to agree that the environment is our responsibility.
I found it easy to get my ideas down onto the doc, and to think of a good opening statement, and a closing statement.
I found it hard to think of different topics for different paragraphs, and to have them all based in New Zealand.
Next time I will try to make the paragraphs longer and to add more detail so the reader will agree with my idea.
Wednesday, September 23, 2020
The Environment Is Our Responsibility
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Hi Toby, I really like how you have added a lot of facts to you piece of
ReplyDeletepersuasive writing. I also like how all your pictures match your topic on your slide. Something I would encourage you to do is put it more into you own words because it feels like you didn't fully put in your own words, but other than that I really like your piece of persuasive writing. :)