We were learning about recount writing, and Editing and Recrafting. I found it easy to do the editing. To fix all of my spelling mistakes, and my grammar. I found it challenging to do my recrafting. it was hard to bump up my sentences with better words, and take out bits that didn't really need to be in the story. Next time I will try to write less. I have a habit of writing whole a page as a paragraph.
Thursday, August 6, 2020
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Hi Toby.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you were being really descriptive in your Wild Lab writing.I also like how your photos are maching you slide.Something I would encourage you to do is make the words bigger.